Riveting! I don’t think I’d be sitting back comparing New Zealand to a billiard table!!! And I’d definitely be overusing the exclamation marks by that point!!!!!!! Near death is allowed a lot of punctuational leeway in my book!!!!!!!!! X
Sometimes we're lucky and the training sticks, we don't know it, until we have a close call and then realise just how much worse a situation could have been.
Riveting! I don’t think I’d be sitting back comparing New Zealand to a billiard table!!! And I’d definitely be overusing the exclamation marks by that point!!!!!!! Near death is allowed a lot of punctuational leeway in my book!!!!!!!!! X
I'm trying to wean myself off exclamation marks. And semicolons. You should have seen the first draft: more punctuation than alphabet!
Lovely writing and a great tale of adventure JH
Nicely written!
Sometimes we're lucky and the training sticks, we don't know it, until we have a close call and then realise just how much worse a situation could have been.
So true.